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Breaking apart
seemingly perfect
deep inside
confusion is rampant
questions unasked
doubts unanswered.
Broken. Useless.
tears run  like     rivers.
Streams.
Alone. Time.
I stall for time.
Questions unanswered
tumble 'round my head.
I'm breaking apart.



© 2008  A. Rivera
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Decided to write something new...

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:iconsaykha:
it's beautiful...

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I am what I am, until I am no more...
:iconangelofgod87:
Thanks :)

TTFN
Me
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"I learned a long time ago that one note can go a long way if it's the right one, and it will probably whip the guy with 20 notes." ~ Les Paul
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1 Timothy 4: 12
:icondyczer:
i dont know if it was done on purpose or not, but i like the fact that the space before rivers is rather long, i read it slowly when i came to it. had a nice effect.

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The best laid page of vice and din are often wrote in haste.
:iconangelofgod87:
No... I'd no idea that I'd done that... but you're right it lends an interesting effect
actually... this is how I've been feeling for a while :hmm:

TTFN
Me
:)

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"I learned a long time ago that one note can go a long way if it's the right one, and it will probably whip the guy with 20 notes." ~ Les Paul
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1 Timothy 4: 12
:icondyczer:
thats too bad, maybe youll see somethi amazing, every time i have the blues i see somethng amazing and i feel good again

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The best laid page of vice and din are often wrote in haste.
:iconangelofgod87:
Hmm... maybe...

TTFN
Me
:)

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"I learned a long time ago that one note can go a long way if it's the right one, and it will probably whip the guy with 20 notes." ~ Les Paul
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1 Timothy 4: 12

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