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Breaking apart
seemingly perfect
deep inside
confusion is rampant
questions unasked
doubts unanswered.
Broken. Useless.
tears run  like     rivers.
Streams.
Alone. Time.
I stall for time.
Questions unanswered
tumble 'round my head.
I'm breaking apart.



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it's beautiful...

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I am what I am, until I am no more...
Thanks :)

TTFN
Me
:)

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God bless you and keep you, make His face shine upon you and give you Peace. Live by FAITH not by SIGHT by God's TRUTH and not this World's LIES.
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1 Timothy 4: 12
i dont know if it was done on purpose or not, but i like the fact that the space before rivers is rather long, i read it slowly when i came to it. had a nice effect.

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The best laid page of vice and din are often wrote in haste.

I've got an idea, but can you make it reality?
No... I'd no idea that I'd done that... but you're right it lends an interesting effect
actually... this is how I've been feeling for a while :hmm:

TTFN
Me
:)

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God bless you and keep you, make His face shine upon you and give you Peace. Live by FAITH not by SIGHT by God's TRUTH and not this World's LIES.
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1 Timothy 4: 12
thats too bad, maybe youll see somethi amazing, every time i have the blues i see somethng amazing and i feel good again

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The best laid page of vice and din are often wrote in haste.

I've got an idea, but can you make it reality?
Hmm... maybe...

TTFN
Me
:)

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God bless you and keep you, make His face shine upon you and give you Peace. Live by FAITH not by SIGHT by God's TRUTH and not this World's LIES.
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1 Timothy 4: 12

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